IELTS Writing Task 2: Bài mẫu “unpaid job” essay

Dịch: Trần Tố Linh

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Bài mẫu chủ đề “Unpaid job” cho IELTS Writing task 2

Bài mẫu 11 (xem các bài mẫu khác)

Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.
Do you agree or disagree?

Many young people work on a volunteer basis, and this can only be beneficial for both the individual and society as a whole. However, I do not agree that we should therefore force all teenagers to do unpaid work.

Most young people are already under enough pressure with their studies, without being given the added responsibility of working in their spare time. School is just as demanding as a full-time job, and teachers expect their students to do homework and exam revision on top of attending lessons every day. When young people do have some free time, we should encourage them to enjoy it with their friends or to spend it doing sports and other leisure activities. They have many years of work ahead of them when they finish their studies.

At the same time, I do not believe that society has anything to gain from obliging young people to do unpaid work. In fact, I would argue that it goes against the values of a free and fair society to force a group of people to do something against their will. Doing this can only lead to resentment amongst young people, who would feel that they were being used, and parents, who would not want to be told how to raise their children. Currently, nobody is forced to volunteer, and this is surely the best system.

In conclusion, teenagers may choose to work for free and help others, but in my opinion we should not make this compulsory.

(250 words, band 9)

 

Vocabulary

  • work on a volunteer basis: làm việc tình nguyện
  • under enough pressure with their studies: chịu đủ áp lực với việc học tập
  • is just as demanding as a full-time job: có yêu cầu như làm công việc toàn thời gian
  • the values of a free and fair society: giá trị của một xã hội tự do và công bằng
  • to do something against their will: làm việc chống lại ý muốn của họ

 

 

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